the commotion

the commotion was not visible to the eye but was apparent to the mind. wails of the babies was being punctuated by shrieks of some women. air was stuffy by the increasing warmth and patience of the men was running low after power backup failure in the overtly expensive premium lounge of the cinema hall.


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i ain't really satisfied with the quality of this [55] story as well as the last one [the white beard - i guess even the title of the last one was inapt]. i guess i have become over-confident after geetu's compliment.