an effort i gave myself couple of brownie points for
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their roundness and firmity was bringing water to his mouth. he has waited for them too long. with eyes incredulously wide and mouth a little open he patted one with almost an awe in his breath. he brought his mouth to one and sucked upon the heavenly juices that oozed out that spongy bengali rosogulla
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this [55] one was written in a single effort without any editing at all. although a little surprising but the result pleased me nonetheless.
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6 Comments:
sweet :)
Applause!! ;)
manu - thanks yaar
sam - thanks
knw what??? on this topic u can run your imagination 100 times and in those 100 times you can write these 100 ,55 words posts.
roshagullas- mannnn ya made us think dirty.. we wan sum mre.. cum give it to us :)
geetu - hmm
rrr - :D
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