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what is this 55?

Wednesday, May 28, 2008

the imperfect story

not that i was ever very good at this 55 thing, but i didn't hate my attempts then as much as i do now. anyways another such attempt below:-


the floating

the water still felt warmer and ravi was happy. probably it was how the white sand reflected the sunlight. plus of course the bikinis. the current was good and he had grown used to the temperature which stung initially. water was waist high and some good waves were going above his head. suddenly as another wave surged in front of him something hit his nape and he found himself gasping for breadth under-water.

thankfully ravi isn't going to die yet, especially while falling asleep in his jacuzzi

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just completed a technically better 55. feeling better :D will post it later :D

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13 Comments:

Anonymous geet said...

very nice attempt yaar.. liked it.simple and precise words.

5/28/2008 01:12:00 PM  
OpenID churningthewordmill said...

good show... how many words did u use up??

5/28/2008 01:36:00 PM  
OpenID churningthewordmill said...

knock knock!

5/28/2008 02:35:00 PM  
Anonymous burf said...

geetu - thanks :) though i wanted to be better technically

churning - 87 :D

:D

5/28/2008 02:38:00 PM  
OpenID churningthewordmill said...

so for a first attempt, its pretty darn good..!!

5/28/2008 03:39:00 PM  
Blogger Sam said...

Now I understand "55"!! ;)

5/28/2008 03:47:00 PM  
Blogger ~ ॐ ~ said...

lol...

wonderful Tushar !!!

claps claps...

5/28/2008 03:55:00 PM  
Anonymous burf said...

churning - first??? :( even you have commented on my earlier attempts :(

sam - :D did you like this one?

om - thanks bro :D

5/28/2008 04:30:00 PM  
Anonymous Aqui78 said...

Wats with the magic no?

5/29/2008 09:02:00 AM  
OpenID churningthewordmill said...

i wrote the THIRD 55 fiction... where'z your next story,mister?

5/29/2008 09:51:00 AM  
Blogger Sam said...

A good, sense making 55!! :)

5/29/2008 12:20:00 PM  
Anonymous burf said...

aqui - you shouldn't be asking this question :O

churning - third??? i can't see any beyond 2nd???

samy - :D thanks

5/29/2008 01:50:00 PM  
Anonymous burf said...

churning - oh! i see it now

5/29/2008 01:54:00 PM  

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