the imperfect story

not that i was ever very good at this 55 thing, but i didn't hate my attempts then as much as i do now. anyways another such attempt below:-


the floating

the water still felt warmer and ravi was happy. probably it was how the white sand reflected the sunlight. plus of course the bikinis. the current was good and he had grown used to the temperature which stung initially. water was waist high and some good waves were going above his head. suddenly as another wave surged in front of him something hit his nape and he found himself gasping for breadth under-water.

thankfully ravi isn't going to die yet, especially while falling asleep in his jacuzzi

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just completed a technically better 55. feeling better :D will post it later :D