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Wednesday, September 17, 2008

her smile

it has always been so with them, he thought - even with room full of people he could be alone with her. another lovable thing about her was that she never cringed on his touch, no matter how many heads may turn.

but today was different. she was smiling to him. and he could touch her hair. but he was empty inside and he cried and wondered why was she all alone when she died.


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not a 55. jitni mushkil kuch comic likhne mein hoti hai utni hi kuch serious mein hoti hai

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10 Comments:

Blogger austere said...

ji.

badhiya likhai.

9/17/2008 03:07:00 PM  
Blogger Trinaa said...

woowww...beautiful!!

9/17/2008 05:34:00 PM  
Blogger ~ ॐ ~ said...

ek disclaimer likha kar when you are writing something sad !!!

I was in no mood to read something like this to start my day !!!

9/17/2008 08:25:00 PM  
Blogger Pooja said...

nice!
i have always wanted to wrote one..

9/17/2008 11:07:00 PM  
Anonymous burf said...

austere - :D thanks

trina - :D

om - bhai very sorry hai

pooja - :D thanks, do tell whenever you do

9/18/2008 12:07:00 PM  
Blogger pseudo intellectual said...

this was really, really good.

9/18/2008 06:48:00 PM  
Blogger rantravereflect/ jane said...

:( made me cry :(

but beautiful

9/21/2008 01:27:00 AM  
Blogger spicymist said...

hey this was awesome. I love the way you right. I can directly visualise the stuff when u describe it that way

9/21/2008 12:24:00 PM  
Anonymous burf said...

pseudo - :D thanks

rrr - hmm, thanks

spicy - thanks

9/22/2008 10:29:00 AM  
Blogger Niedhie said...

I guess, I can read it over and over again to derive new meanings everytime. Matured writing I would say.

10/02/2008 02:22:00 AM  

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